The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good and encouraging devotional. Keep it coming!
03/01/08
A good message for all of us - I like your use of real-life examples. Keep writing!
03/01/08
Excellent devotional, with very valid points about hypocritical behavior.

Ironically, you decry the use of "Christian-ese", but you also used a bit of it in your opening and closing paragraphs. If you re-write this, think about brand new ways of expressing those familiar Christian concepts, perhaps?

I like your title, and this would be a great opener for a Sunday School class or small group.
03/02/08
I'm sorry but I'm not getting the title. Wouldn't language and speech be the same thing? I think you mean what's really in a person's heart does not match what they are saying. There is a scripture that says that too. Anyway I understand the sentiment of the article, keep writing.