The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
beautiful poem well written, Great work
Great message in poetic form.
03/01/08
Lovely message with some lovely images. This made me smile.
03/01/08
Oooh, should be read by all adoptive mothers, and by all adoptees. Wonderful.

Some stumbles in meter, and there should be an apostrophe in the title.

None of that interferes with your beautiful message.
03/02/08
Nice poem, a trip here and there for meter, but I enjoyed this very much. Keep up the good work!