The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you these comments need to be expressed and show a great hunger for reality.

I had to read carefully but think I could feel a certain desperation.

Tell your story to others as well as keeping on writing.
True fellowship has to start in each of us. This is so true. Good devotional.
03/01/08
A wake-up call we all need to read, I believe. Thank you for sharing it.
03/01/08
I love your tiger paragraph--very good imagery.

Note: you used "affective" where I believe you wanted "effective."

Glad you included that last paragraph--nice ending note.
03/02/08
A well written article, personally I do not totally agree with you but that's okay. I have seen the church step up in recent disasters where the goverment didn't. TRUE believers follow after Christ, and do those things that Christ would do. To make a change in this world it starts with one, yourself. Keep writing.