The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes, we are all too busy to schedule the Lord if we're not careful.
Excellent poetry, meter and rhyming! It reminds me of a scripture in Revelation: Remember your first love...
God bless you.
The rhythm of this is just like the pace you are describing - very well done that way. An excellent message for us all.
I LOVE the breaks in meter toward the end, which force the reader to slow down and GET it. Perfect.
Nice job.
Not everyone might understand the reference to Martha, if you ever intend to show this story around, especially to a non-Christian audience. However, the poem itself is quite realistic and well-written. Good job! :)
Congratulations on your highly commended. Love the meter of the poem--and you were spot on for the topic.