The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes, we are all too busy to schedule the Lord if we're not careful.
02/29/08
Excellent poetry, meter and rhyming! It reminds me of a scripture in Revelation: Remember your first love...
God bless you.
03/01/08
The rhythm of this is just like the pace you are describing - very well done that way. An excellent message for us all.
03/01/08
I LOVE the breaks in meter toward the end, which force the reader to slow down and GET it. Perfect.
03/02/08
Nice job.
Not everyone might understand the reference to Martha, if you ever intend to show this story around, especially to a non-Christian audience. However, the poem itself is quite realistic and well-written. Good job! :)
03/06/08
Congratulations on your highly commended. Love the meter of the poem--and you were spot on for the topic.