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02/28/08
Beautiful, beautiful allegory.

Quick note: the plural of "lullaby" is "lullabies". Keep the apostrophes for possessive nouns.

This one gave me goose bumps.
A great story.
02/29/08
Vivid descriptions and details in this piece. Wow! Great job.
02/29/08
This is excellent. Your word choice, the tone, the message, the descriptions - everything. Just wonderful.
02/29/08
Wow! This one reads like a drama. Excellent.
03/01/08
A beautiful (tear jerker) story of love and compassion. Very creative and passionately done to the point of bringing tears to this reader. That's the sign of a good writer. Kudos!
03/01/08
Wonderfully done. I didn't expect the ending, which I love. Bravo.
03/01/08
Good job.
Wow! This reads just like a classic children's fable. It's so well-written and ends with a great message. Keep it up. :)