The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your story. I had to re-read through some parts because I wasn't sure what was happening. Still, a very nice job.
Interesting; I saved this one for last after scanning all the essays. Had to work at reading it, probably readability is very high - nothing more to say, good work.
After reading again I realized how confusing it was. Did some rewriting (too bad I didn't have time to do it BEFOREhand) and plan to keep working on this. I'm thinking possibly of using it in a novel about this woman's journey to truth and healing.
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Yes, didn't go to your rewrite but this is definitely good stuff and will be all the better with your fine-tuning pen. It's so easy to assume the reader knows exactly what we are thinking :) and then if we go and add in the details we go over the word count !!