The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/08
Good hook! I like the first several first-person paragraphs, unusual for a Challenge entry.
02/23/08
I feel as if I have just come from a Church Service where the topic from the pulpit was "Forgiveness", and delivered eloquently by a preacher who knows his Bible. And now, as I leave, I reflect on the truths that I have learned. Thank you.
02/23/08
I like this - well-presented and an excellent message. Good work here.
"The first cut is the deepest," and Christ suffered that cut in our place. A great presentation of reality.
02/25/08
Very well put together piece. Personally I am not an advocate of "once saved, always saved", I do however believe the Bible.