The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/08
I love the old adages, too!

FYI--always capitalize the word "Bible."

02/23/08
Many good thoughts and sayings, but a couple of helpful hints: 1) Separate the long paragraphs into smaller ones, making the story more reader friendly. 2) Needs a bit of editing on punctuation, etc. but practice makes perfect...so don't give up the ship! Keep writing - don't ever throw in the towel or you will be Biting off your nose to spite your face! Sound familiar? (*.*)! Nice job.
02/23/08
Thank you for sharing your heart with us. I can tell you are very passionate about this. Watch your punctuation, and keep writing. Enjoyed this.
02/25/08
Good sentiment here. You started in the first paragraph with quotes around the phrases and left this practice in the rest of your article. You were on the right track with the quotes, they were also needed with the quotes from the Bible also. Keep writing and God Bless.