The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/08
An interesting historical account, and right on topic.

I got a little bit lost in all the details; I wonder if you could just pick one moment and a few characters to highlight this story.

Very good writing.
02/23/08
A lot going on here. Very strong writing and truly frightening situation.
Good old south african history. Loved it. Well done
Keep using your talent you are blessing many. Love Norms
03/03/08
Wow! I know very little about South African history and your account of this episode in time is chilling, and an apt example of the the topic. You have a good style of writing and I'll be looking for more of your work. My only suggestion? A little more dialogue to tell your story; it's a very exciting story and would be even more so if the reader were in the moment with the action. There's a lot of impact in this tale!