The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Very nice story. You kept my interest all the way and illustrated the topic perfectly. Nicely written!
02/14/08
Yes, I OFTEN get more wound up than I should. Great example of the proverb. Some proofreading by a grammar buddy would make this great story even better. Great storytelling! :)
02/15/08
I must have got caught in the story, because no grammar fixes jumped out to distract this reader. (^&^)
Your title "twist" is a clever hook into your story. Good job!
02/16/08
You created a realistic scene and told the story well.
02/16/08
You created a realistic scene and told the story well.
02/17/08
Like the title and the story, wish the relationship between the two girls could have been fleshed out more though. Good job.
02/18/08
Nice take on the Title...and a delightful little story which is a good example of our Topic this week. Nicely done...and an enjoyable read.
02/21/08
Yea, Althea !!! Great job!
good story, I liked your characters.
02/21/08
Congratulations on your EC!!!!! :)
02/21/08
Sorry, I meant HC!!!! Highly Commended!
02/21/08
This was good! I can't believe I missed it, but I loved the character of Claudette and how she was able to help her friend in her own sensible, quiet way. Awesome writing-and congrats on your highly commended! ^_^