The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Such great advice for us as Christians. Thank you for sharing your heart.
02/15/08
"My doctor, an old-fashioned country doctor, gave me medication for my health problem and very wise advice...." I'd like to read more about this individual and what he had to say. You could actually put the words of your devotional in the mouth of characters, like this.
[Since Jesus taught in parables, I'm always partial to storytelling. (^&^)]

Otherwise, a well-written devotional.
02/17/08
Your devotional trounced on the instructions, "not use the phrase or literal example." I know it's hard but that's part of being obedient, following the rules. Also, the part with your mother's wisdom, either left out a word or two, or was lost in translation. The sentiment was there so keep writing.
Good advice.