The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
LOL... TOO funny! Totally enjoyed your story!
02/14/08
Oh, what a hoot! LIke the way you took the story and tied it into the topic at the end.
02/14/08
"...he reminded us that grandma wouldn’t understand gut words so there was no need to bring them up." Priceless :D This was a fun story! One thing you may consider that is less distracting (at least to me) is separating sentences that hold two complete thoughts with a period or a semi-colon instead of a comma. Overall, I loved the originality of this piece...ALMIGHTY HALLELUJAH especially :)
02/17/08
After reading this twice I finally got it. Nice story, the topic almost didn't make it in the story though.
02/19/08
Excellent! A delightful read.
02/21/08
Congratulations on your 1st place in Intermediate!!!! :)
I love the title and the story. Very colorfully written. Congratulations on placing first. It was well deserved.
02/22/08
Congratulations, Jason - not only did you place first in intermediate, but your entry was 27th overall. Great work!