The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Great example and a very exciting story. Thanks for sharing!
02/15/08
I think your title is the best of the best this week, since red eyes certainly fits with crying!
You write well and on topic and you know how to keep your reader entertained. Good job!
02/16/08
Vivid descriptions in this piece. Great story.
02/17/08
Good story.
02/22/08
Congratulations, Emma, on placing 15th in your level with this piece. Great work!