The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Praise God that Carol was big enough to help turn things around. I like the way she used the shattered vase as an analogy with their relationship. Their mama will be proud and smiling from above.
Good example of "moving on".
02/16/08
Well-written. You chose a good object (fragile vase) to illustrate your point.
02/17/08
No surpries here, when there was a vase in question I knew where the story was going. Overall good writing though.
02/22/08
Congratulations, Lucille, on placing seventh in your level with this piece. Great work!