The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
A great many people will be ministered to through this piece. YOu might read over several times for spelling or find a good spelling buddy to look over it. "Marital" instead of "Martial" and a few more little ones. All easily correctable.

Well done and perfectly on topic. :)
02/15/08
I thought that "Martial" in your title was on purpose, since the sweethearts were fighting over the ice cream flavor. (^&^)
You write well. This would work as an interesting devotional, given your application paragraph summary.
02/17/08
Not exactly on topic, not getting what you want is not the same thing as "spilt milk". It is a lesson on not using energy on the less important things that cause us grief. Keep practicing, keep writing.