The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Love it. YOu illustrated the topic very well and even kept my toe tapping while you did it. Keep rhyming! :)
Good advice in poetry form.
I really enjoyed the message of your poem, despite some inconsistancies in meter.
If you're looking for a challenge buddy to help proof for those pesky typos, you can reach me on the message board as HWNJ, or see the e-mail listed in my profile here.
02/22/08
Congratulations, Wendell, on placing 12th in your level with this piece. Great work!