The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
What a story! Did this really happen to you? Scarey stuff.
Please take my suggestions for what they are, my personal opinion. Your title led me to think at first that your piece would be a child's story, but it was anything but that. Also, I didn't see a very strong tie-in to the topic.
You have a lot of wit in your writing. I enjoyed that. :)
02/15/08
I agree with the previous reviewer on one thing, needs a new title. The other comment not seeing the tie-in, she must be blind.. I mean she probably needs to not speed read :) I really enjoyed this story. I think the guys out there will really get a bang (excuse the pun) out of it. Keep writing, Good job!
02/19/08
There's no use crying over being spilled by a cow! I can almost hear the roar of the bikes...