The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Oh, my goodness, what a HOOT! I laughed out loud several times.

A couple of suggestions:
Double spacing after each paragraph would make it easier to read, and for the challenge, be careful about using the actual literal words in your entries. In the instruction at the top it mentions to illustrate the topic without using the literal example of "spilt milk."

Too bad cows don't produce water! Still, I really enjoyed this piece, and you have a lot of talent in story-telling. :)
02/15/08
Boy can you tell a story! all you need is a little more practice in the areas of spacing and proofreading. You are a writer. Good job!