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02/14/08
What an incredibly moving story. Thank you for sharing it.
Two broads protruded over them where the roof once stood firm. Those boards were in the shape of a cross. Beyond the cross, the young couple could see two stars in between the passing clouds. Beautiful picture here.
02/14/08
Way to bring a current event into the topic! A little closer proofreading would benefit this piece. Keep writing :):):)
02/15/08
A little fleshing out perhaps, but the sentiment is very good and on topic. Overall good job.
02/19/08
Excellent story -- I can hear/see/feel the tension of the impending disaster...and the reaction during and after! God smiles as you write.