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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: birthday (05/23/05)

TITLE: Celebrating Our Birthdays in Heaven
By Patricia Coldiron
05/27/05


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The sky will be dark and thunder will crack
There will be no doubt that Jesus is back
As He ascends from Heaven, the faithful will shout
The graves will open and the dead will come out

His coming is so bright, I canít even see
But I know by His promise, that Heís come for me
He looks so majestic with His golden crown
As the faithful followers gather around

Well done good and faithful ones, youíll no more roam
Today is the day that Iím taking you home
As we soar through the sky, tucked under His wing
The angels in heaven begin to sing

The streets are golden, and look at that tree
Our departed love ones now we can see
Sitting with Jesus, we learn more of His word
But thereís still so much we have not heard

Our first birthday in heaven came up so fast
It was hard to believe that a year had passed
But a year is not much, compared to eternity
New lands to explore and much more to see

The years will fly by, many birthdays will pass
But I am so thankful it will never be our last
Eternity is promised, Jesus wonít let us go
Forever Iíll bask in that heavenly glow.


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Debra Bowers06/01/05
Very pretty poem. Original thought and great imagination. Hope I can celebrate with you. "God Bless"
dub W06/03/05
The matched verse stanzas are interesting, and you have written a powerful thought.