The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/05
A very nice, heart-warming story. It was slightly confusing, though--in the beginning, your protagonist is refered to as "Warren", and then you switch to first-person and call him "I". It would be easier to understand if you were consistent. Very sweet childhood story, though.
Very sweet story. My heart ache for the boy and his family. When your story causes emotions to stir in the reader than, you know it's a well done piece of work.