The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/08
Good story, good writing, a good read. I saw one mispelled word at the end.
02/08/08
Sad story of the American dream...shattered.

The gang was bad company, but I didn't see the meaning of the proverb here--being judged by the company one keeps.

I've been through that Midway neighborhood many times!
02/08/08
This has happened so many times, and it's sad each and every time. I couldn't quite see the meaning of the topic, but you made my heart ache for people caught in similiar situations.
Good job!