The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/08
What a beautiful testimony of a life changed. When posting online, if you leave an empty line between paragraphs it's easier for the reader to read. Wonderful testimony!
02/09/08
What a marvelous testimony!

I don't think you need the opening "Tarzan" comparisons...the young woman's story is very compelling, and would really grab readers' interest.