The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked this story, wish it had of gone on. Well done, Cheryl D.
This is a great example of the topic! Well done.
The title alone... depicts this week's topic to a "T". Nicely done. Just a helpful hint or two...You missed capitalizing "He" a couple of times and I believe the "cock crowed"...not "crew; however, an interesting and touching read that I thoroughly enjoyed.
Perfect story for this topic! I enjoyed this re-telling.

FYI--it's more accepted to use three periods than three commas...

Very well done.