The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/08
I loved this story, it was well written, and the dialog was wonderful, I love the illustration of the skunk, in reference to friends, and how they rub off on us. Very well written
02/07/08
I love the connection that is formed between children and 'senior adults' (grandparent figures), and you used it beautifully to convey a great lesson. The dialect added authenticity without hindering the reader--great! :-)
02/08/08
A delightful story, written well, with a moral that fits the topic well. Nicely done in an entertaining and enlightening way...enjoyable read. Kudos!
02/09/08
Very well done, with a charming title, too.
Good article on the topic. I enjoyed reading this.
02/14/08
Really enjoyed this, good dialect for the setting. I just wondered if Grandpa was so wise wouldn't he use a more better way of de-skunking a dog besides soap and water?
02/14/08
I just may be a bit prejudiced, since I know the author of this story, but I have to say it. This is masterful writing, my friend! You write the dialect so well, that your reader can "hear" the character.

Also mighty impressive, you have two winners with your first two faithwriter entries. And, you're not yet out of high school. I'm so glad I told you you belonged here (^&^). I'm thrilled.
02/14/08
Oops! That should be two winners out of your first THREE faithwriter WC entries. Still impressive :)