The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/08
So true--this reminds me of the type of mini-devotional often seen in "The Daily Bread" booklets.

Can you spice it up a bit by adding some personal examples, or a bit of humor to hook your readers?

I encourage you to use more of the allotted 750 words--you definitely have important thoughts to share.
02/05/08
You have some very good thoughts here. Would like to see it expanded and personalized. Very much on topic.