The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/05
What a poignant lesson, from a fly no less! Don't we all neglect the "finer" things in life! Well done.
I clicked on your article because it had the most interesting title. I almost didn't read it because its format looked difficult to read. But I am so glad that I read it. What a wonderful testament: that we could learn a lesson from such an annoying pest. God really is remarkable; He teaches us in the most unexpected ways. When we share these lessons, others learn, too. This was nicely written and had great flow. Thank you for sharing it.
I loved your title too. Beautifully written and a great point. Nice job.
Ha, well done and also a great title which grabbed my attention. What I took away from this is "Don't be a fly!" I'll probably say this to myself when I'm being a 'pest' to those around me. Wonderful lesson!
06/03/05
Bravo! An attention holder for sure. Thank you.
A great, creative take on the topic. Very well done! I agree with Leticia's comment about the format, though. Please put a white space between your paragraphs and you'll get more readers. Once they read your content, they'll be glad. I am! Great work.