The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/08
Poor Esau - but he did get to be rich and famous and became the Father of the Arab Nation. Not bad for a loser.
But it did knock a lot of the shine off his inheritance.
Thanks for writing. Blessings
02/05/08
You certainly sparked some new life to this age-old tale. You brought Rebekah to life in a way I hadn't thought of her before. The ending was good. This is nice, and the spacing and shortness of each scene is good. Nice job. ^_^
02/06/08
Good job bringing to life a familiar story, with great characterisation.

There were a few mechanical things that a Challenge Buddy may have caught -- missed quote marks, etc.

You show the topic on two levels, Isaac vs Esua, and Rebekah as faithful wife vs bias mother. Great job.