The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story. It's reads like a condensed romance novel. And right on topic. A little bit of fool's gold for Carol though. Nice job!
02/05/08
Oh Carol! I wish she could've seen past the little shallow dave. Grrr! He messed up the pretty picture-lol. This was good, easy reading, I enjoyed the adventure and the ending was sad, but it was good. Nice job. ^_^
02/06/08
I really enjoyed this story. You present the contrast and all of Dave's signals well. Keep up the good work.