The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/08
WOW!! EXCELLENT!!!Can't say enough about your story. Gripping to the end. It had me on the edge of my seat. The ending suprised me as I thought you were writing about Paul. This is a real winner. Looking forward to more from you. Next time I'll check you out in the Advanced catagory. Keep it up.
Excellent writing. I did find a few typos that were a tiny bit distracting but this is truly a work of art. Masterful storytelling. Bravo! Encore!
02/02/08
Great story!
What a powerful piece - excellent writing!
02/06/08
You had me eagerly waiting to see who the prisoner was. The MC was only one of the many choices that crossed my mind, others were his soldiers. Great suspense.
02/07/08
Wow! Talk about Telling it like it is! The scene becomes so visual with this writer's talented wordsmithing. Great stuff! A couple little typos - but A Fascinating read! - And fits the topic to a "T"! Good Job.