The Official Writing Challenge
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You attracted me to your story with your title (my name) and then it was so fun to read, but sad. Not being a southern girl though, some of this was hard for me, but that is not your writing skill, but my reading skill.
02/05/08
The dialouge is very interestingly flavored! The song near the end was interesting, it combined with the story. So sad that it turned out that way though, the ending had a hint of humor in it though, good job! ^_^
Looks like Ma Brown's golden promises of confidence were as empty as the producer's were of fame and fortune. Nice double depiction of the topic.
02/06/08
Well done on the dialogue. You kept my interest throughout the story. Great illustrations of the topic.
02/07/08
I just done love hearing tell that story of Becky Lynn going downtown to Nashville, an' I won't tell no-one what she done down there neither. Love the Southern voice and characters so beautifully depicted. I just had to read that darn story right out loud so I could hear what they was a-saying fer maself. Now I jus' wonders if you got some more stories where that one came from 'cause they's a great readin'.