The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/08
A fun read and Jimmy learned his lesson! Thanks.
02/04/08
I agree a fun read, a little rough in sections, meteor problems but overall not bad.
Enjoyed your poem and happy ending for Pat!!
02/06/08
Glad Pat got her man. This was a fun read.
02/06/08
This is a cute story in verse. Even the disclaimer at the end is precious. :^)
02/07/08
The poetic rhythm adds that "ho hum" feeling that might otherwise be made by the violins! I like it!