The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/08
Your work had impact because it is so topical. Well done.
02/05/08
Ouch! I so wish that it didn't have to end this way. That if, every once in the while when everyone, including those dearest to us are speaking about the pros and cons, if we'd only see! lol. You portrayed this very convincingly and I liked the comparison to the artist's impression, that was very good. Nice job here! ^_^
02/06/08
Excellent example of the topic. One that hits home with many these days. You do a great job conveying his concern for his wife and the "protect her from truth" mentality.