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This was disturbing in so many ways. I only know too much of this.
Sure was a sad day! Love Norms
This is an all too familiar biography for many Christian churches today. My husband and I feel strongly that the leading of the Holy Spirit is a significant missing part in our services and decisions made in the churches today. We need to invite The Holy Spirit back into our services, hearts and all decisions we make. Thank you for writing on an eye opening topic.
Marilyn
How true this is! My husband and I are leaving our church, which is now housed in a huge new building, and has become a mega-church. A well-written tale.
02/06/08
Very good lesson and very much on topic. Great job. This story could have taken place anywhere, so the reference to the rand caused me to do a double-take. Keep writing!