The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a delightful story. There are several capital letters missing from the start of several sentences, but I loved this story and revival in this woman due to opening her heart and life to the child who reached out to her.
02/03/08
Very nice story, needs a little work here and there. Not quite on topic but a pleasant story nonetheless. Good job.
02/05/08
This is good! Your one-word title draws some attention to a great story. I am glad that she decided to befriend Jimmy, even with her comparison to Dennis the Menace-lol. This was a lovely, light read, there was some capitalization needed in a few areas, but otherwise, good job.