The Official Writing Challenge
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This was very sad. Parents neglecting two other children for one and no caring on either side on what life was about for them.
02/05/08
This is one of my favorites this week. It is so sad, and sometimes I feel for your character, because, in instances, that is me. You really captured some excellent feelings and emotions, that is truly what it feels like, and the ending, I am so glad she had a brother to share her happiness with and a new sister-in-law. Your title is excellent too! ^_^