The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/08
What an ending! This one reads like a drama or a skit. Excellent writing.
This was very good. I enjoyed and was happy with the ending!
02/05/08
I'm glad Carolyn made the right choices! Your title was excellent for this piece and I especially liked how you used the word "sacrifices" throughout, it really brought it to life and helped me to relate as she went through everything, and in the end, the real sacrifice was there for her to make and she made the right choice. Great job! ^_^
02/07/08
A story that needs to be written. Well done.