The Official Writing Challenge
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Very cute.

A satisfying conclusion with no Sylvester in the picture. :-)
01/25/08
Very sweet, and I especially like your last line.
01/30/08
I hope tweety appreciates what a good Mom he has. I was relieved that he didn't get eaten by the end. Cute,fun to read.
01/30/08
This is darling, and I love this clever rhyme.
01/30/08
Pictures of a very tiny baby Tweety kept coming to mind as I read this! I bet it could work out into a Children's story. This is very cute and easy to read. Great job. ^_^
01/30/08
I had to smile at the "tweety heart burn". You've woven a sweet rhyme with this tweety-tale". I could imagine this as a children's book. :)
01/30/08
I like "tweety heart burn", too! Cute and clever turn at the topic-it's really sweet.