The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/08
Yes, HE will do to trust. I like it that you remind us to follow THE leader. With our eyes on him, we are less likely to fall on our faces.
01/24/08
Great analogy!

Except for the sayings, you don't need to use so many quotation marks. They usually indicate that you're using a phrase ironically, and they lessen the impact of what you're saying.

Good writing--keep up the good work.