The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/08
The description of the sounds of the violin in the first two prargraphs was quite lovely (despite an "it's" that should be "its"). This was a really good way to illustrate the topic. Be careful of starting in present tense and switching to past tense.

I really appreciated the dad's loving attitude, and the little tag at the end. Oh yes, loved the sound effects, too!
01/24/08
The description of the sounds of the violin in the first two prargraphs was quite lovely (despite an "it's" that should be "its"). This was a really good way to illustrate the topic. Be careful of starting in present tense and switching to past tense.

I really appreciated the dad's loving attitude, and the little tag at the end. Oh yes, loved the sound effects, too!
02/02/08
This is beautiful. Your writing is amazing. I love the comparison of music to the spiritual.
Wow! Powerful story to those of us who love the music in the world. Thanks. :)