The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/08
Very compelling comparison--I like the back-and-forth structure.
Enjoyed reading this and how you did the two comparisons.
01/27/08
Very Semper Fi-ish from a guy's point of view. I'm sure your descriptions will be very relatable to those who serve.
01/28/08
Great read. Easy to follow and kept my interest. good comparison. thank you.
02/01/08
Very touching, and Right On!
Beautifully and nicely done!