The Official Writing Challenge
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Spot on topic, and an enjoyable read, though it was no mystery where he was headed.
Having been to a few rodeos, I appreciated this story which was a perfect use of the prompt. I've always been mystified as to where the allure is in trying to ride a bucking horse. The title is perfect. Good job.
This is a great use of description with words to describe well the event of this young cowboys downfall.
01/27/08
Couldn't quite get the feel of the atmosphere. Maybe more detailing of how Race felt as he sat in the stall waiting to go out. You had the meat but no potatoes, liked the title though.