The Official Writing Challenge
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Very evocative writing - you definitely pulled me in.
This seems to illustrate the opposite of the topic, but I was blessed by it nonetheless. Keep writing.
This was a good piece of writing with a unique point. I liked the line "drew circles in the air" as it showed us and did not tell us.
Some very, very good descriptions here! I liked the ancient feel of this piece as if I were with him on the journey and watching the entire thing unfold in front of me. This is very good, I like the almost haunting feel of it-makes it stick with me. ^_^