The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/08
Great title - and you did a very good job of painting the scene for us. Enjoyed this.
01/21/08
This was a good piece of writing. You could make it even better with the appropriate use of more commas and a Thesaurus, but even the lack of those did not spoil this entry.
01/22/08
Heehee, I was wondering where you were going with this title. I like the wilderness twist on this piece, my only note is a few typos...clam is once misspelled as "Claim" and one more somewhere near the bottom, I think. Otherwise, this was pretty good! ^_^