The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/08
Very nice rhyme and meter, and great word choices, especially in the last two stanzas. Nice job
01/20/08
I really loved this message. Great rhyming!
01/21/08
You wrote this well and forced me to slow down and savor it a little, which I like.
01/22/08
This is really nice! I love the last line best of all, it made me smile.

Just a note-the last line on verse two, it seemed a little awkward, it could just be me though, 'springtime' sort of read as a longer 'word' than the rest of the lines before it.

Good job though! ^_^