The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/08
This was a wonderful illustration, and lots of fun to read.
I love this immensely creative story! The double entendre was great, too.
Cute story. I think you overused the names and could have used pronouns, but otherwise good story.
01/18/08
This is cute and delightful - your pigs have such great personalities! I love the repetitive use of the "p" sound (purposeful or not). This entry is right on topic, and was just plain fun. I truly enjoyed the read!
01/21/08
A really...I can't help it... CUTE story! I liked the way you inserted the humor and the interaction between bro and sis. I think there's a typo at the end when he's carrying her home to grandma, otherwise, this was pretty good-cute and fun! ^_^
A well deserved win, I loved the sibling pigs! Keep uo the good words.
01/24/08
***Congrats!***
01/24/08
Congratulations on 1st place! This is a delightful piece!