The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
I love how you've given the characters distinctive voices and personalities. I also love your imagery and word choice. "Puddle of rubber" is so unique, yet exactly how a flat tire looks. Good job!
01/11/08
Excellent writing! I was entirely captivated by the voice of this entry.
Unique descriptions that paint a realistic picture with words. Great job!
01/14/08
Great job with characterization and voice. Nice.
01/14/08
Wow, your dialogue is so engaging. I LOVE this line: A noise that sounded like an angry laryngitic teakettle was coming from the passenger side.
01/14/08
Your descriptions are excellent. Good job.
01/16/08
I could see the whole story as though I were watching a movie. Very vivid dialogue and imagery. It's a slice of life that's pulled out and examined perfectly.