The Official Writing Challenge
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There is a lot of good stuff here, keep writing. I can't wait to see what is next.
Precious story. It should be placed in church bulletins.
Whoa, you stopped me in my tracks with the "I am Pauly" line. Excellent!
Excellent example shown by Pauly. A lot in this piece, quietly said. Good job!
I've been arogent enough to make such a phone call.

Thanks for being so forgiving.

This was so real to life, I thought it was a story about me.

You have a life challenging style. Keep writing!
Let my people be humble! Excellent article on the topic.
Instead of a "stitch in time saves nine" - How about a "A sharper Blade in time saves nine"? A great moral in this piece, Pauly..."keep your cool and just forgive the fool" - and keep up the good Grizzard tactics! (*.*)