The Official Writing Challenge
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Not sure how I'm feeling about this, I was happily enjoying her preparedness and then felt bad that her life had been so empty of love.
Great writing, you pulled some heart strings here!
01/10/08
Wow - you really subverted the message! Interesting story, and a real kick at the end.
01/10/08
You caught me in your trap. Good job. I was unprepared for the reversal. It really got your point across. Nice work.
01/11/08
Almost unbearably sad--and very good writing.
01/15/08
Good job and good writing. Very good message. Her prepardness was only in the natural.
Congratulations! This was my personal favorite in Intermediate this week.
01/18/08
I just read this today, and I must say it absolutely capitvatived me. Beautiful writing.