The Official Writing Challenge
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beautiful story! I want to read more.
Great account of triumph in the face of tragedy. Your title was what peaked my interest and you held me captive. You are a wonderful storyteller, with the ability to weave different aspects within a lifetime to create a special moment for the reader. If this is a true story, hooray for standing strong in such difficult times; if it is a creatively made up story, wonderful! Very nicely done.
05/23/05
I love the imagery, like the crushed eggshells clinging to the son's pants. A touching story, gently told.
05/23/05
Great job! Pulled me right into the moment.
05/23/05
Well done!

05/23/05
The scene was very real and alive. The characters had depth and emotion. Those are the markings of a great story .... and this is one! Great work!
Wow! Neat story. So glad I read it. Your writing made it very real.
Well written and very interesting story!
05/30/05
Top notch, well done!
05/31/05
Hi Christie. Just popping in very quickly to let you know that you were in the semi-finals for the Valentine Challenge and did very well. So give yourself a pat on the back - you deserve it. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)